This story brought tears to my eyes when Face confesses that he gave himself to Sanders to try to prevent him from messing up what he had found with Hannibal's unit. You did a great job writing the military stuff. I thought the sniper scene was really exciting. I could hear the guys all talking over each other. I was not sure Face had made the shots. You are an incredibly patient writer. You take your time telling stories which means they are very satisfying to read. Thank you so much for sharing your talent with us.